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This just the Super Mario Bros. Theme

reversed and with a pass filter layed over it. It needs to be more original. Also, you submitted it into the wrong genre.

trashcanman responds:

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Excellent

This sounds pretty professional. What do you use for your instruments? It really feels like you're in the middle of a concert! Also, what happened at 1:35? :0

leaderoffheidiots responds:

ah crud! at 1:35 my mp3 converter didnt stop so it read empty sheet music.......

and from my resopnce i used sheet format with classical instraments and vocals

Huh

What happened to the bass? I think the raw crunchy analog synth you used in the first version sounded better. It sounds more digital in this version. I agree with durn about the awkward octave change at 3 minutes. Overall, I think it sounds pretty good.

AlSarci responds:

I like both basslines, just this one is a bit easier on the ears and speakers :P

The octave change only feels strange to you, because your not used to it yet :)

Thanks for the feedback :D

Nice bassline

The bassline pretty much made it. Loved the part at 1:44-1:45.

Hmm...

The third note (and every other time it appears in that pattern) sounds kinda off. It sounds fine on even occurances though (like at 4 sec). Maybe try to avoid too much repetition. I'm sure you could do something with this if you work on it some more. The synth sounds nice though.

SupraDarky responds:

Hmmm alright alright, I'll have to check that out! Thanks for the review.

:'(

This is amazing! The high notes really hit at your emotions. This is what makes the NG Audio Portal worth coming back to.

BlazingDragon responds:

I am so glad that you understand the significance of the high notes! I showed this to my little brother, and he simply said, "Meh...It's kind of good. But not like your other sad songs. You know...it's simple and slow and stuff." I was angry, suffice to say. :P

I really believe that simplicity is crucial to music if utilized properly. If this was faster or had more complicated chords, it would shatter the mood I was trying to convey. Those simple high notes and strings were meant to convey a specific mood and emotion. The texture was thin on purpose. I'm getting away from the review. My bad. xD

Thank you for your comment. I am happy that you have enjoyed me song.
~Blaze

I want to play this game

If there ever is one... I'll take two. ^^

Woah

Really fast paced. Interesting synths. Even though I can tell you used the basic drum samples that come with FL Studio, it worked. I'm not sure what to say... Nice job.

Has potential

It sounded a bit messy. The piano was too loud, it was kinda repetitive, and the drums could also use some tweaking. I'd like to hear a full version of this.

TheStickz responds:

Haha, actually this was a full version. I only have the Demo of FL, so I can't make my songs that long. When I get the Full Version, I can Make Better ones.

Nice

I think it sounds great on its own rather than with the drums from before. It sounds like the background music to some anime I'd like to watch. Nice job!

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