guyperson42x's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ninja vs Pirate]

OK here's a few pointers

The animation was very choppy. Try to make the FPS higher and draw more frames to make it more fluid. Second, maybe you could try adding colors. It will make the characters stand out even more. Third, try adding some sound effects. It gets very boring when all you hear is silence. Good luck on future animations. :]

Lare responds:

Thanks for the pointers. I'll probably make another one very soon, so I'll try add some sound and colors.

[district blade ryu EP:4]

The "next" button doesn't work

Redo it, then reupload.

[I Get A Kick Out Of You]

Very interesting style of animation

Thank you for not being boring! This is probably the first submission today that I've actually really liked. The beginning part with the fish was really well animated. I laughed when I saw the guy that looks like the Canadians in South Park. Good job :]

Now for the criticism: I think the lines were a little too light. I wouldn't make them completely opaque, but maybe just a little bit darker to contrast with the background.

[Kanzeni Marin Nitsuite]

WOW

AAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Nice. Make more!!! :DDDD

[Dialogue at the Zoo]

That was....AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Wow. I wish I could make something as good as that. Anyways, where can I get the song from the end??? :DDD

[The Ani Song]

It was ok..I liked the Llama Song better

It would have been funnier if it was faster. It was too slow, so IMO it wasn't that funny. Good job anyways.