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[Ninja vs Pirate]

OK here's a few pointers

The animation was very choppy. Try to make the FPS higher and draw more frames to make it more fluid. Second, maybe you could try adding colors. It will make the characters stand out even more. Third, try adding some sound effects. It gets very boring when all you hear is silence. Good luck on future animations. :]

Lare responds:

Thanks for the pointers. I'll probably make another one very soon, so I'll try add some sound and colors.